2015高考英语作文点评及详细解析新课标II卷

2015高考英语作文点评及详细解析（新课标II卷）

第三段：我但愿（你也能去）。我相信（你会喜欢这个活动）。感谢你（读我的信）。请回信（告诉我你的决定）。

来源：新东方在线

今年全国新作文的题目为：

假定你是李华，打算和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival），请给外教露西写封邮件，邀请她一同前往，河南头条网消息：，内容包罗：

Dear Lucy,

LiHua

Best wishes,

How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and enrich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.

2、活动：包饺子、演出节目等

【老师范文】

第一段：问候+辉式自我介绍+辉式写信配景（去敬老院）+辉式写信目的（邀请同去）

1、出发及返回时间

第二段：主题句+辉式拓展句1（出发及返回时间）+辉式拓展句2（活动，such as……）

Yours,

Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at 8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

“邀请信”“告知信”等应用文题目，需要考生们把握“建议”、“请求”、“感谢”等功能性语句。书信体作文可用到“书信三段论”，需要注意的是中间过渡段的用词以及制止不须要的语法错误。

按照题目要求以及我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：

Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision.

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